Yasuo Makoto to to Zanpakatou!

Name: Hikari

Manifestation: (What does your zanpaktou spirit look like?)

Release Phrase: Shine and Devour

Family: Light/Holy

Level: Shikai Level.

Sealed Zanpaktou: Pure light. It's like a normal zanpaktou, with a normal hilt ... like a light saber. But the blade, is made out of pure light. It sustains itself with light around the area. Both natural and artificial light.

Shikai: Anything Yasuo Manipulates it into. The Zanpaktou also absorbs Light in the area. Both Natural and Artificial.

Shikai Ability: Gives Yasuo the Ability to Manipulate Light.

Tech 1: By jabbing/hurling an arrow into the opponent's eye. Doesn't matter which eye. The user puts the opponent in an Illusion. The opponent is engulfed by a Large burst of Light, which erupted from the Arrow ... which is made of Light of course. They see themselves surrounded by Mirrors. The ground itself is a mirror. So is the sky. Everywhere is a mirror basically. The mirrors emit arrows, which explode once in contact with something. Due to the explosion of Light, with the arrows slamming into each other. The opponent gets blinded, if only their eyes is opened. And they temporarily get blinded in the real world. (But in the Illusion, they are blinded forever.) The only way to get out of this Illusion is to shatter all the mirrors in the area. Simply by using a powerful technique, such as a Gran ray Cero on the mirror he/she is standing on. Meanwhile, while in the Illusion, Yasuo could attack them from the real world. But remember, if they jump in the Illusion, they jump in the real world as well. Meaning anything they do in the Illusion, they do in the real world. In the real world, it would just seem as if they are attacking pure Air.


Ya o.o



Can it be approved for now?!

4 words: Usage limit and cooldown.


Also your shikai ability is rather vague, try to be more specific on how you manipulate the light and how that has anything to do with putting you in an illusion.

by the way Rose..I don't think a sealed zanpaktou has abilities >_>.

Yes that too, though to be honest a sealed zan doesnt have to be a blade, which is why I said nothing at first since I would be reviewing this again.

What do I need to change again....

Add cooldowns to all of your techniques. How do you put yourself in illusions by using light with your shikai ability? Your sealed zanpaktou cannot be used to manipulate light, you cannot shoot beams of light with your sealed zanpaktou.

Edited, temp. How about this ... when the arrows slams into the Eye of the target, it blows up, erupting into a large explosion of light, which bursts all around the target, seeming to engulf him. While the Target is blinded, Yasuo manipulates the light into mirrors, sealing his opponent into it. Since the mirrors are made out of light, it would blind his opponent forever, that's if the opponent remains there for more than five of my posts. ._. Better ...?

Last for 5 of my posts. 10 post cool down.

Before we move on, you are entirely TOO vague on your shikai ability.

Tech 1: By jabbing/hurling an arrow into the opponent's eye. Doesn't matter which eye. The user puts the opponent in an Illusion. The opponent is engulfed by a Large burst of Light, which erupted from the Arrow ... which is made of Light of course. They see themselves surrounded by Mirrors. The ground itself is a mirror. So is the sky. Everywhere is a mirror basically. The mirrors emit arrows, which explode once in contact with something. Due to the explosion of Light, with the arrows slamming into each other. The opponent gets blinded, if only their eyes is opened. And they temporarily get blinded in the real world. (But in the Illusion, they are blinded forever.) The only way to get out of this Illusion is to shatter all the mirrors in the area. Simply by using a powerful technique, such as a Gran ray Cero on the mirror he/she is standing on. Meanwhile, while in the Illusion, Yasuo could attack them from the real world. But remember, if they jump in the Illusion, they jump in the real world as well. Meaning anything they do in the Illusion, they do in the real world. In the real world, it would just seem as if they are attacking pure Air.

Where does this arrow come from? And how does the ground turn into mirrors as you've implied that it does so in the real world. How can they be temporarily blinded in the real world, but blinded forever in the illusion? You're contradiicting the technique in itself, meaning by the time they regain sight, the illusion is rendered obsolete. And also, you've yet to tell me how and why the mirrors are there and got there. And for a person on your level, a simple cero would break the mirrors as a technique in shikai like this shouldn't be TOO OP whereas a GRC can only be enough to break it. Clean up this technique..

Yasuo Makoto wrote:

Edited, temp. How about this ... when the arrows slams into the Eye of the target, it blows up, erupting into a large explosion of light, which bursts all around the target, seeming to engulf him. While the Target is blinded, Yasuo manipulates the light into mirrors, sealing his opponent into it. Since the mirrors are made out of light, it would blind his opponent forever, that's if the opponent remains there for more than five of my posts. ._. Better ...?

Last for 5 of my posts. 10 post cool down.

Er ... I edited it to this ...? Oh, it's you again ...

Explain these mirrors..are they a seperate dimension? How do they trap them?

Er, if you read it well, I said ... I quote, "Yasuo manipulates the light into mirrors, sealing his opponent into it." No, they aren't Separate Dimension. Since that is too advanced technique for my Char. They are just mirrors made of light, in the real world. Making a sort of rectangle around the Target. Get it?

I didn't feel like Logging into Yasuo. What's the point?

I've read that part, thus why I asked the question. It's your fault for being vague since you said you sealed your opponent INTO the mirrors, but not surround them in the mirrors...

but NOW since you've explained it, approved.

Yasuo's Zanpakutou absorbs the light from the surrounding area. Once enough light has been taken in, it all bursts from the blade in one big blast. This blast quickly surrounds Yasuo and his opponent, forming a shield of light around them both. This shield blocks anyone from entering or exiting by physical means, and also stops the people inside from escaping using techniques or reiatsu related abilities. That doesn't prevent them from using hand-to-hand combat. However, the only person who benefits from this would be Yasuo. The shield, allows Yasuo to Manipulate the light around to an extent.

This are what Yasuo could manipulate the Light into:

Light Shield: Blurting out "Light Shield", a Mirror, made of pure light sprouts out from in front of him, shielding him from any of the following attacks: A punch, kick, slash from a Zanpaktou, or Resurrection. Can with stand a Captain level level slash, punch, kick, you get the point. But it shatters into shards when attacked four times by a captain leveled person. Difficult to shatter by a LT leveled person. The Mirror however, does reflect the image of whatever is in front of it. Meaning, if you had your eyes opened when an opponent attacks it physically, it reflects the light around the area, and opponent, temporarily blinding the opponent. You get the point?

Light Blast: Yasuo is able to absorb the light around the area into his palm, and blast it out as a powerful force, able to burn, and hurl the opponent backwards.

Light Spikes: By simply saying "Light Spikes", Big, broad, sharp spikes, made out of the light in the area, sprout up from the ground around the opponent, closing in on the opponent. The only way the opponent is able to dodge this, is by jumping upwards ... which would be difficult see ... due to your surrounding booming with light. However, it's quite easy to hear, if you are relying on your hearing senses in the shield. This spikes basically hold the opponent in place for Yasuo to attack. Last for two posts. 4 post cool down.

Light Blast (Zanpaktou): Similar to Light blast. But more advanced. By slashing his Zanpaktou at his opponent, while it's manipulated into a Sword, it sends light blast towards the opponent. Bear in mind Yasuo's attack in the shield are much more stronger, sharper, and burns like fire.

Side note: The Shield is filled with Light. Everything in the area is pure light. The only thing Yasuo, and his opponent would see are each other. Nothing else. But due to Yasuo being exposed with so much Light, his sight wouldn't be affected by all this Light. The same thing works for his opponent. But if they aren't exposed to so much light, their sight would greatly be affected, requiring them to close their eyes. The Light techniques/abilities usable in the shield consume the light around the area. If Yasuo uses the techs and abilities more than twice, all the light in the area would weaken, and the shield would disperse.

Lasts for 10 of Yasuo's post. 20 post cool down.

Yasuo Makoto wrote:

Light Shield: Blurting out "Light Shield", a Mirror, made of pure light sprouts out from in front of him, shielding him from any of the following attacks: A punch, kick, slash from a Zanpaktou, or Resurrection. Can with stand a Captain level, or CC level slash, punch, kick, you get the point. But it shatters into shards when attacked thrice by a CC leveled person. Five times by a captain leveled person. Difficult to shatter by a LT leveled person. The Mirror however, does reflect the image of whatever is in front of it. Meaning, if you had your eyes opened when an opponent attacks it physically, it reflects the light around the area, and opponent, temporarily blinding the opponent. You get the point?

Waaaaay too powerful. It should withstand one attack by a Captain at best. Add a cooldown please.

Yasuo Makoto wrote:

Light Spikes: By simply saying "Light Spikes", Big, broad, sharp spikes, made out of the light in the area, sprout up from the ground around the opponent, closing in on the opponent. The only way the opponent is able to dodge this, is by jumping upwards ... which would be difficult see ... due to your surrounding booming with light. However, it's quite easy to hear, if you are relying on your hearing senses in the shield. This spikes basically hold the opponent in place for Yasuo to attack.

How long do these spikes hold the person in place?

Add cooldowns to all of these abilities, also, each ability would take up some of the light within the shield so they should decrease the time the shield stays active by some amount. For example if you used Light spikes the shield looses a turn from the length it lasts for. Otherwise this would be too strong.

Edited.

Light Bomb: This technique may cause damage to the user unless the user backs away instantly after activating. After activation, the zanpaktou will shine exceptionally, blinding everyone in the vicinity temporarily. However, this may be changed to permanently if an exceptional person is using the technique. They are blinded for 15 posts. Made by both of the users. So about .. Seven posts from both Fighters.

Well I guess since both combatants are effected, Light Bomb approved.

{Edited Version.}

Yasuo Makoto wrote:

Yasuo's Zanpakutou absorbs the light from the surrounding area. Once enough light has been taken in, it all bursts from the blade in one big blast. This blast quickly surrounds Yasuo and his opponent, forming a shield of light around them both. This shield blocks anyone from entering or exiting by physical means, and also stops the people inside from escaping using techniques or reiatsu related abilities. That doesn't prevent them from using hand-to-hand combat. However, the only person who benefits from this would be Yasuo. The shield, allows Yasuo to Manipulate the light around to an extent.

This are what Yasuo could manipulate the Light into:

Light Shield: Blurting out "Light Shield", a Mirror, made of pure light sprouts out from in front of him, shielding him from any of the following attacks: A punch, kick, slash from a Zanpaktou, or Resurrection. Can with stand a Captain level level slash, punch, kick, you get the point. But it shatters into shards when attacked four times by a captain leveled person. Difficult to shatter by a LT leveled person. The Mirror however, does reflect the image of whatever is in front of it. Meaning, if you had your eyes opened when an opponent attacks it physically, it reflects the light around the area, and opponent, temporarily blinding the opponent. You get the point?

Light Blast: Yasuo is able to absorb the light around the area into his palm, and blast it out as a powerful force, able to burn, and hurl the opponent backwards.

Light Spikes: By simply saying "Light Spikes", Big, broad, sharp spikes, made out of the light in the area, sprout up from the ground around the opponent, closing in on the opponent. The only way the opponent is able to dodge this, is by jumping upwards ... which would be difficult see ... due to your surrounding booming with light. However, it's quite easy to hear, if you are relying on your hearing senses in the shield. This spikes basically hold the opponent in place for Yasuo to attack. Last for two posts. 4 post cool down.

Light Blast (Zanpaktou): Similar to Light blast. But more advanced. By slashing his Zanpaktou at his opponent, while it's manipulated into a Sword, it sends light blast towards the opponent. Bear in mind Yasuo's attack in the shield are much more stronger, sharper, and burns like fire.

Side note: The Shield is filled with Light. Everything in the area is pure light. The only thing Yasuo, and his opponent would see are each other. Nothing else. But due to Yasuo being exposed with so much Light, his sight wouldn't be affected by all this Light. The same thing works for his opponent. But if they aren't exposed to so much light, their sight would greatly be affected, requiring them to close their eyes. The Light techniques/abilities usable in the shield consume the light around the area. If Yasuo uses the techs and abilities more than twice, all the light in the area would weaken, and the shield would disperse.

Lasts for 10 of Yasuo's post. 20 post cool down.

Whatever..approved.