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PostSubject: Zane's Kido   Zane's Kido I_icon_minitimeThu Mar 18, 2010 2:21 am

Level: Hado 96

Name: Oni Bushi (demon samurai)

Incantation: Hell fire rage and chaos take order. Steel clash on steel and honor ring pure. Come forth now shadow of the light and bring death to all that oppose you.

Effect: The effect of the kido is very simple. It summons two samurai with the teeth of sharks and glowing purple eyes to assist the caster for up to three posts. Three samurai are summoned if the incantation was said in full. These samurai fight with the skills of a powerful unseated officer in the Gotei 13 and in turn can be killed like a shinigami. Also, while the samurai are present the caster can not move, so at least one of the samurai is normally guarding the caster at all times while the other one (or two) fight the enemy.


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PostSubject: Re: Zane's Kido   Zane's Kido I_icon_minitimeThu Mar 18, 2010 2:24 am

guess i can go in order this time. So once this gets approved i'll train for it.
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PostSubject: Re: Zane's Kido   Zane's Kido I_icon_minitimeThu Mar 18, 2010 3:43 am

This is just a pic so that you get a better idea of what th warriors look like.




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PostSubject: Re: Zane's Kido   Zane's Kido I_icon_minitimeThu Mar 18, 2010 3:25 pm

Erm... no, DENIED.

This is basically something that could be covered in techs when Kido should be something very unique, not usually a summons. Especially considering that these Samurai will be trumped in combat quite easily.
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PostSubject: Re: Zane's Kido   Zane's Kido I_icon_minitimeThu Mar 18, 2010 7:01 pm

Level: Hado 96

Name: shi no keimusho (death prison)

Incantation: Hell fire rage and chaos take order. Steel clash on steel and honor ring pure. Come forth now shadow of the light and bring death to all that oppose you.

Effect: A chaotic sphere is formed around the target and encases them in an alternate dimension. Then six demon samurai form from the walls and strike the opponent from above, below, in front, back, and both sides with jagged edged katana. The opponent could move while inside the dark prison although not much.
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PostSubject: Re: Zane's Kido   Zane's Kido I_icon_minitimeThu Mar 18, 2010 7:01 pm

is this any better?
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PostSubject: Re: Zane's Kido   Zane's Kido I_icon_minitimeFri Mar 19, 2010 8:32 am

Do you control that dumb-ass samurai?
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PostSubject: Re: Zane's Kido   Zane's Kido I_icon_minitimeFri Mar 19, 2010 8:39 am

Shamal... I hate to say it but you didn't read it properly. There is another dimension. And the Samurai attack the opponent from all directions. MEANING there isn't only one samurai. And I understood that he can't control the Samurai as they do the same movements everytime the Kido is used. Now, I would like you to add some drawbacks as it's a pretty high number Kido.
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PostSubject: Re: Zane's Kido   Zane's Kido I_icon_minitimeFri Mar 19, 2010 8:42 am

how about the opponent can dodge some of the swords if they are fast enough and that to cast the kido Zane has to place the kanji for death on the opponent.
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PostSubject: Re: Zane's Kido   Zane's Kido I_icon_minitimeFri Mar 19, 2010 8:44 am

And I think it will take some time to cast that Kido on the opponent. As #90 took shitloads of time to cast. But Aizen did it instantly.
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PostSubject: Re: Zane's Kido   Zane's Kido I_icon_minitimeFri Mar 19, 2010 8:46 am

probably like a turn to charge and prepare the kanji, then a turn to place the kanji, and then the effect takes action.
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PostSubject: Re: Zane's Kido   Zane's Kido I_icon_minitimeFri Mar 19, 2010 8:47 am

Okay. In that case, approved.
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PostSubject: Re: Zane's Kido   Zane's Kido I_icon_minitimeFri Mar 19, 2010 8:49 am

alright now to train for it.
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PostSubject: Re: Zane's Kido   Zane's Kido I_icon_minitimeThu Apr 01, 2010 10:22 am

Disapproved.

Because of the show yadda yadda, change the number of the kido, yadda yadda.
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